Episode 1 feed back, Pre-Launch.

As soon as Matt had finnished editing and puting the music i found for it (Killing time by Centre Folds) on, we took the final version over to Nick (1/2 Cram Creatives) to watch and give us his critical opinion.

Nicks main points were:

• The background noise is un-profesional.
• The actors are clearly not confident in their lines and need practice.
• More camera angles, faster cuts and cut aways to make it more visually interesting.
• The show needs to be more interesting, comedic, dramatic, fast paced.
• It also needs to be more visually comical.
• Be more organised.
• Make sure everyone knows whats going on.
• Shoot everything twice to make sure we have usable footage.

With this in mind, after we have gained more feed back etc after the episode has been launched we will all evaluate our work in order to maximise the improvement in episode 2 and 3